Rewritten Story
Robert and Jodie live in Newcastle. One Saturday morning they went shopping with their parents. They went to a big supermarket. Robert pushed the shopping trolley. They bought bread, milk, tea, jam, fruit and vegetables. Suddenly Mother looked up. Where was Jodie? She had become separated from the family. Mother went to the desk. The lady there made an announcement over the loudspeaker. Soon Jodie came to the desk. Where had she been? She had been reading books in the book department. Mother was pleased to see her daughter. At last now it was time to go home. Dad started the car and off they went. It had been a busy day.
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